Pretty cool animation ! :)
But in my opinion I think that it would be better with more ambience sounds, like more people talking in the background, music volume a little bit higher, wispers and little sounds the characters could be saying even when they are not talking, walking steps, seagulls sounds in the sky, buble pops sounds in the soup, that kind of stuff.
And maybe trying to do the animation with a little more fast pacing ;)
But I like your style and this animation looks very profetional, Keep it up !